Seeking ligth and shadows critique
#2
Hey man.

Your lighting is pretty good if you're going for an illustration based on the animal, as seen in like history books.
I think if you're going to make it more of an illustration you need to play with the trees some more.

I did a paintover for you(I basically copied the original, made it darker and then erased stuff here and there). I feel this is more like a still from Jurrasic Park. Again, it depends what you're going for.

As for the lighting, here's 3 more examples by Pascal Campion. (He knows his light!)

http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_Bg9VzHNyfMQ/TG...-1760B.jpg
http://pascalcampion.com/images/work/2234B.jpg
and this one is really applicable to your situation:
http://www.123inspiration.com/wp-content...ion-16.jpg

Hope that helps!

cheers


Attached Files Image(s)



Reply


Messages In This Thread
Seeking ligth and shadows critique - by oxiso - 09-10-2013, 11:46 AM
RE: Seeking ligth and shadows critique - by DoubleThink - 09-11-2013, 05:07 AM
RE: Seeking ligth and shadows critique - by oxiso - 09-11-2013, 10:54 PM

Forum Jump:


Users browsing this thread: 7 Guest(s)