09-14-2013, 05:06 AM
Start over. Your gladiator is misshapen and the composition is boring for the subject matter.
Draw up some thumbnails to plan out what you're going to do.
If you want depth, your composition must employ it. Right now you're just drawing something that looks like a screenshot for a 2D sidescroller. And that doesn't sound like what you're going for.
Think of where your camera is going to be, and what it will accomplish. Think about the techniques dynamic compositions employ for effect.
Here's some useful stuff you could read.
http://sevencamels.blogspot.com/2012/04/...matic.html
http://muddycolors.blogspot.ca/2010/11/thumbnail.html
http://muddycolors.blogspot.ca/2012/08/c...cture.html
Draw up some thumbnails to plan out what you're going to do.
If you want depth, your composition must employ it. Right now you're just drawing something that looks like a screenshot for a 2D sidescroller. And that doesn't sound like what you're going for.
Think of where your camera is going to be, and what it will accomplish. Think about the techniques dynamic compositions employ for effect.
Here's some useful stuff you could read.
http://sevencamels.blogspot.com/2012/04/...matic.html
http://muddycolors.blogspot.ca/2010/11/thumbnail.html
http://muddycolors.blogspot.ca/2012/08/c...cture.html