some help with depth

[Audie Eagleheart]

I feel like starting over is the solution. Like Psychotime wrote, just start with a few thumbnails. Choose the most dynamic one. Make sure you're getting the right focus on the subject you want for your viewers. Also, take your time planning the scene, meaning experiment as much as you want. Dont rush to rendering until you feel you got the whole foundation right.

edit: Hopefully I didnt sound like a dick. Not that I think I sounded like one, but I know how much it sucks when you invest time on something only to have some guy to tell you "START OVER. I AM THE LAW!" heh.