03-13-2012, 07:48 AM
Did a quick paint over. Right now the very bright moon is against the dark sky, causing to moon to look like it is farther forward than it should be. Check your perspective lines on the house and the docks too.
Hiding the moon a bit and making it a bit less dramatically contrasted moves link back to the front of the comp on the front half of the sleeve design.
One the left side, check out the door that the lady is standing in. The window to her left is lit, but the door is completely dark. Light up that door way and let the light spill out into the dock area a bit.