09-19-2013, 03:26 AM
Hey cracked, thanks for stopping by my SB the other day. This last pirate ship piece has a fair amount lof potential, nice composition and good colours for an eery night atmosphere.
I'd suggest working on your line quality when doing gesture sketches etc make bold confident marks, a line drawn confidently but maybe not correctly looks better than a line drawn correctly using little timid strokes to join it up.
Also your colours seem to lean toward very dark or the mid tone value range, doing some value only studies could help you with that.
It's great to see you putting in the effort to improve, keep it up! :).
I'd suggest working on your line quality when doing gesture sketches etc make bold confident marks, a line drawn confidently but maybe not correctly looks better than a line drawn correctly using little timid strokes to join it up.
Also your colours seem to lean toward very dark or the mid tone value range, doing some value only studies could help you with that.
It's great to see you putting in the effort to improve, keep it up! :).