09-26-2013, 10:45 PM
Color aside, I think you could squeeze some more interest out of your pose, you have a nice dynamic curve coming up through the legs that just straightens out when you hit her ribcage. Pushing the head up and angling it slightly gives your character more flow and also gives you a nicer negative shape with the wings. Bringing up the left elbow as well gives you a better flow along the arm and a nicer cross.