Shirt Critique

[ChantalFournier]

I really like the style you are going for, it works quite well for a shirt design. For the deer, some of the spots inside the ears and around the eyes look like they were in the reference so you put them in but you don't understand what they represent. They look a little random to me and don't describe the form. The inside of the ear looks flat but with little dark spots. Also the antlers somewhat overlapping the smokey shape bugs me, but it might be just because the piece is not finished:)

I thing you could also make the shape where the neck ends a big more interesting and designey.

Good job overall.