09-30-2013, 04:19 AM
Hey Archon! You may know me from Sycra's forum.
Here is some thoughts about design:
I think it's would be nice to add some mass and detalisation to that helmet and skull. This guy supposed to be a living one while ago but helmet sits pretty tight but there was skin and hair before!
You get what I'm talking about? looks like helmet was crafted already for naked skull.
Adding teeth would be a nice turn I think. For now it looks kinda funny more that scary-sketelon guy. And he is dead! He went through some battles and wehere killed before! Add some holes in plates, rags and other messy stuff.
And for 2 spears... I don't think it works well. Spear is not that kind of weapon you want dualwield it's not rly handy. Put shield on other hand or one spear in both hands!
I hope I helped a little! Good luck with the contest! ;)
Here is some thoughts about design:
I think it's would be nice to add some mass and detalisation to that helmet and skull. This guy supposed to be a living one while ago but helmet sits pretty tight but there was skin and hair before!
You get what I'm talking about? looks like helmet was crafted already for naked skull.
Adding teeth would be a nice turn I think. For now it looks kinda funny more that scary-sketelon guy. And he is dead! He went through some battles and wehere killed before! Add some holes in plates, rags and other messy stuff.
And for 2 spears... I don't think it works well. Spear is not that kind of weapon you want dualwield it's not rly handy. Put shield on other hand or one spear in both hands!
I hope I helped a little! Good luck with the contest! ;)