09-30-2013, 08:25 PM
Hey Nefas,
Good job on the face. I agree with Beirot in regards to the anatomy and value changes but not the detail part. I dont think the problem here is detail it is the structure and values. You have a good basis here but you need to work on the areas mentioned above. When you get those parts a bit better you will see a big difference in your work. Think about the details after.
I did a quick paintover on your piece to give you a idea of what I mean. As you can see here I didnt add detail. One other thing I forgot to mention was more consistent lighting. In your piece the light could be a little more defined.
I hope this helps
Cheers
Adam
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Good job on the face. I agree with Beirot in regards to the anatomy and value changes but not the detail part. I dont think the problem here is detail it is the structure and values. You have a good basis here but you need to work on the areas mentioned above. When you get those parts a bit better you will see a big difference in your work. Think about the details after.
I did a quick paintover on your piece to give you a idea of what I mean. As you can see here I didnt add detail. One other thing I forgot to mention was more consistent lighting. In your piece the light could be a little more defined.
I hope this helps
Cheers
Adam