Old Hag - another participant on CHOW :)

[Amit Dutta]

Hey Mignon, good luck in the Chow! :) I don't have a lot of crit this far on, but I think besides the wings which are very rigid and butterfly like something I noticed is that your hag is fairly masculine if you don't count the boobs. The fat one seemed to be a bit more obvious, so perhaps play with that a bit to amplify the design. Speaking of boobies, the baby heads kinda mix with the boobs, so maybe get some separation going, and have some bits where her body actually shows through. Her legs are very powerful looking for a decrepit hag. Also right now your figure is pretty much a singular block in the comp. If you look at her arms, legs etc everything fits into this rectangular block. I think breaking up the silhouette might create some flow, make it more interesting and dynamic.

So hope that helps...I'm not sure where I'm going with mine but will definitely try and finish it off