10-04-2013, 08:02 PM
really loving where this is going, i like the posture of B on our left (yes... challenged could be the word... heh), and I agree with the crit above- the pose at the top sketch looks a bit forced to me, not much energy in it- the lines of action are very stiff and rigid.
The one on our left has a great pose, really decrepit, you could perhaps push it further by having slightly bent in and splayed legs like shes struggling to stay upright?
just an idea. Anyways great start i really like it so far (and of course go with your gut above all, so feel free to disregard what i just said!)
The one on our left has a great pose, really decrepit, you could perhaps push it further by having slightly bent in and splayed legs like shes struggling to stay upright?
just an idea. Anyways great start i really like it so far (and of course go with your gut above all, so feel free to disregard what i just said!)