10-13-2013, 05:30 PM
Ah I see, well that is fair enough. The one thing about Julie Bell's characters though is that while they are pretty well muscled, they are also undeniably feminine. What I think your character exhibits is more androgenous than anything. If this is what you are going for then it's all good, but if not, you might want to look at pushing some things back a bit more to the feminine side. As a quick diagnostic I'd say maybe softening up the face and making that less masculine might go a long way. Anyway it's up to you what you want to portray, so the balls in your court. :)