kerm's SKitschbook - Please help by giving critique! Will be really appreciated!
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nice sketchbook! you are a lot more strict with yourself doing studies than i am, i need to keep them going...
really like the last piece btw, though keep on top of your light source- on the right with the house, im not sure why (the lighting being top right) the weeds hanging from the island would be such a saturated and lit colour, nor the bushes and house. what I think this piece needed to ground it was some contrasting cool areas of less saturation and bluer hues, like the mid section of the house on our right.
same applies to the rocks by the city.
still that said, really love the concept and it has an awesome dream like feel to it which i really like, feels like an illustration to a novel. good work buddy :)
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RE: kerm's SKitschbook - by kerm - 09-24-2013, 06:09 AM
RE: kerm's SKitschbook - by kerm - 09-27-2013, 07:02 AM
RE: kerm's SKitschbook - by Madzia - 09-29-2013, 04:27 AM
RE: kerm's SKitschbook - by kerm - 09-30-2013, 07:46 AM
RE: kerm's SKitschbook - Please help by giving critique! Will be really appreciated! - by Wardy - 10-23-2013, 06:40 AM

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