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I require assistance!
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10-23-2013, 05:57 PM
Everything that Rognoll said + I would add more contrast, focal point. Viewer should focus on her. See the paintover.
Btw: Aren't her legs missing?


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I require assistance! - by Zesiul - 10-23-2013, 09:12 AM
RE: I require assistance! - by Rognoll - 10-23-2013, 09:37 AM
RE: I require assistance! - by kerm - 10-23-2013, 05:57 PM
RE: I require assistance! - by Amit Dutta - 10-23-2013, 08:46 PM
RE: I require assistance! - by Zesiul - 10-25-2013, 03:02 AM

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