10-25-2013, 03:02 AM
Good comments guys, I appreciate the input. Really thats exactly what I needed, a set of outside eyes to spot the things I missed. I took monkeybeards advice and took a second look at the perspective, I found indeed it wasn't right. Luckily it was a quick fix, and I added in some reflective quality to the tiles. I really think that the ideal mood wasn't quite there. I'm dabbling with doing some other background elements... though I won't overload the background.
As for the character herself I pushed her back a few steps. I'm going to try something different this next go. I still want to tweak the horse some more.
Once again this is just a work in progress, far from done. Next I'll be working out on the girl. I need to apply some fixes to the horse still, and also look into those other background items. I'll update you again when I get a chance. I'm busy and don't get to check back too often, but I really really enjoyed your comments. It helped a TON. So thank you!. To be continued!
As for the character herself I pushed her back a few steps. I'm going to try something different this next go. I still want to tweak the horse some more.
Once again this is just a work in progress, far from done. Next I'll be working out on the girl. I need to apply some fixes to the horse still, and also look into those other background items. I'll update you again when I get a chance. I'm busy and don't get to check back too often, but I really really enjoyed your comments. It helped a TON. So thank you!. To be continued!
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