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[Ignatz]

Hey MrFrenik, fuck off. Seriously though, I'd never get offended by anyone taking the time out to help. That's why we're all here right; to get feedback and advice and a fresh set of eyes on our work. I think the point you highlight is indicative of a larger problem though; too many soft edges and too flat a value range creating a lack of contrast. This studying always feels like two steps forward, one step back. Thanks for the crit, much appreciated.:)

Here's the next one.