11-02-2013, 12:06 AM
Okay let's see:
The cloth on her leg (the one closest to us) seems a bit strange in the way it catches the light. The plane seems to flatten out to a perfect rectangle almost. When you shove cloth into a boot, it usually tries it's damndest to push upward.
(http://www.deviantart.com/art/Journeyman...-119405043 for ref)
Next, her head feels a bit too small.
I would also place the stance a little off-center as left foot (our right) seems to make her stance a bit awkward.
I'm loving the expression and the use of patterns all throughout. Patterns are a pain in the ass to paint!
I'm only having to pick out small things to critique as it's looking pretty damn good.
Anyway, keep 'em coming! :)
The cloth on her leg (the one closest to us) seems a bit strange in the way it catches the light. The plane seems to flatten out to a perfect rectangle almost. When you shove cloth into a boot, it usually tries it's damndest to push upward.
(http://www.deviantart.com/art/Journeyman...-119405043 for ref)
Next, her head feels a bit too small.
I would also place the stance a little off-center as left foot (our right) seems to make her stance a bit awkward.
I'm loving the expression and the use of patterns all throughout. Patterns are a pain in the ass to paint!
I'm only having to pick out small things to critique as it's looking pretty damn good.
Anyway, keep 'em coming! :)
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