11-16-2013, 09:23 PM
just as a point, try to avoid submitting huge images, scale them down and crop before you submit because it means poor people like me spend half an hour loading the page :'(
Moving on, I agree with monkeybread's crits, plus personally im not too convince by the lighting- it seems almost like its a wide flash photograph from slightly above the camera? the lighting seems white and unnatural, and there are very little shadows to complementi it.
In my humble opinion, you should try to define your lighting source (strong sun vs weaker moon, warmth and direction before you do most things rendering. I dont know if this is a particular style that you are going for though, so I wont force that down your throat ;)
That said, i really like the style and the design of the characters so great work there :) Just things to keep in mind for next time.
Moving on, I agree with monkeybread's crits, plus personally im not too convince by the lighting- it seems almost like its a wide flash photograph from slightly above the camera? the lighting seems white and unnatural, and there are very little shadows to complementi it.
In my humble opinion, you should try to define your lighting source (strong sun vs weaker moon, warmth and direction before you do most things rendering. I dont know if this is a particular style that you are going for though, so I wont force that down your throat ;)
That said, i really like the style and the design of the characters so great work there :) Just things to keep in mind for next time.