11-27-2013, 09:57 PM
That's awesome. Really like the design and light. Kind of wintery-overcast feeling. Nice!
Isn't the right leg a bit wrong? Maybe pointing the feet to the right would easier and gave a better gesture design? Also... isn't the right arm too long?
Overall It's really nice. Quite realistic, belivable and uncommon. Great haircut that adds her a lot of fight-appeal. I really love the fact that you didn't do a cliche female character which is almost naked and have a huge boobs flashing at you. I know it's quite strange to hear such stuff for a guy, but... man, doing every female character this way is just disgusting. You kind of worked it around to make character appealing without going this way. Nice!
Isn't the right leg a bit wrong? Maybe pointing the feet to the right would easier and gave a better gesture design? Also... isn't the right arm too long?
Overall It's really nice. Quite realistic, belivable and uncommon. Great haircut that adds her a lot of fight-appeal. I really love the fact that you didn't do a cliche female character which is almost naked and have a huge boobs flashing at you. I know it's quite strange to hear such stuff for a guy, but... man, doing every female character this way is just disgusting. You kind of worked it around to make character appealing without going this way. Nice!
It's a somewhat solitary existence, a bit like a lighthouse keeper throwing a beam out into the darkness, in faith that this action might help someone unseen.
My Sketchbook (critique welcome)
My Sketchbook (critique welcome)