Critique/Paintover my glutton monster

[Gabriel-H]

Yo Gabriel,

I livestreamed a critique and some feedback, look up Arthur Rackham, and watch the video here: http://livestre.am/4Idtl

Hey man, can you suggest any other artist with this style?
sorry for the late reply, but i really appreciate your critique, thanks for your attention!

also Psychotime, do you feel i should add lineweight to the drawing?
idk, my inspiration is Moebius, maybe i should work with real paint next time?