01-02-2014, 02:29 PM
Other than what's already been mentioned, mine is more for your next paintings. The original has more movement and energy in the poses, even though they were flat side views. Your view angle is more interesting, but your poses are rigid, especially the knight's. He looks like he could be sitting in a chair in a photo studio and not on a fast-moving, writhing up and down with wing beats, fire-spewing beast in the middle of thin air.