01-03-2014, 08:19 PM
Perhaps a bit of a nitpick, I don't know if it will be corrected in the final piece...
But in the thumb there is an offshoot of a branch that turns the opposite way from the others, going against the nice left to right flow of the rest of the piece. It then touches the bottom edge of the painting and makes a bit of a distracting tangent. I -do- see it in the photo, but the separation from the main body of flowers appears stronger there and its not slicing the sky in half at the bottom edge of the canvas.
To me anyway. ;)
But in the thumb there is an offshoot of a branch that turns the opposite way from the others, going against the nice left to right flow of the rest of the piece. It then touches the bottom edge of the painting and makes a bit of a distracting tangent. I -do- see it in the photo, but the separation from the main body of flowers appears stronger there and its not slicing the sky in half at the bottom edge of the canvas.
To me anyway. ;)