kidult's sketchbook

[Jaik]

woah the colours in the last one is really cool. But for a long time thats all I could see, took me a while to work out what it was. I think you need to set up your values a little better, so that her silhouette is reading a bit stronger. I would take out the flames covering her stomach, while it is good to add depth, you have enough overlap as it is and it just breaks her silhouette and value structure a little too much.

Nice work though I admire your ability to do sci fi >_>, looking forward to what you are producing next.