01-22-2014, 11:29 AM
Hello!
You have a nice anime style, the ones you did from imagination were great.
Just two points I noted about your notes on some drawings. First, that one about the cheek bone being too low in the manga style. Are you sure that is the cheek bone ? I always thought this as being the cheek, and not the cheek bone! :D The second, the one where you tried a nice perspective with the girl sitting. Perspective was not the main issue in my oppinion, the problem is the leg construction. The position you made the foreshortened leg seems unnatural, almost "broken". The foreshortening effect was good!
You have a nice anime style, the ones you did from imagination were great.
Just two points I noted about your notes on some drawings. First, that one about the cheek bone being too low in the manga style. Are you sure that is the cheek bone ? I always thought this as being the cheek, and not the cheek bone! :D The second, the one where you tried a nice perspective with the girl sitting. Perspective was not the main issue in my oppinion, the problem is the leg construction. The position you made the foreshortened leg seems unnatural, almost "broken". The foreshortening effect was good!