01-27-2014, 05:42 AM
You're really improving that's for sure !
But I think you use the soft round brush way too much, mostly on the skin.
Even if it's easier to paint with this brush for gradient the final look is really flat and weird
(http://th08.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/20...72uwtn.jpg
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh111...t2copy.jpg)
Your last illustration is looking good.
The forearm and the wrist seem a bit too big. I don't know if the foot on the top left corner has a meaning, or if it's just for the composition but I think you sould remove it.
It looks awkward to just have a foot coming from nowhere even if we could guess that there is someone in the air (?)
But I think you use the soft round brush way too much, mostly on the skin.
Even if it's easier to paint with this brush for gradient the final look is really flat and weird
(http://th08.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/20...72uwtn.jpg
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh111...t2copy.jpg)
Your last illustration is looking good.
The forearm and the wrist seem a bit too big. I don't know if the foot on the top left corner has a meaning, or if it's just for the composition but I think you sould remove it.
It looks awkward to just have a foot coming from nowhere even if we could guess that there is someone in the air (?)