02-06-2014, 08:13 PM
Much better. I'd suggest making use of diagonals more and working the flow of the composition from side to side more. so working in the angle of the sword to point more to the left corner, or maybe to the right corner.maybe tweak the dragon head angles as well and where it lies vertically in relation to the knight. I'm imagining a kind of zigzag motion to the comp down the image. The main shapes are in a block down the middle if the image as it is now, except for the castle.