02-07-2014, 07:19 AM
4 appealed to me the most, so I'm glad you chose that one! I'm no expert on environments at all, so my critique probably doesn't count for much and I don't have much to say, but I hope it helps a bit regardless!
I think that you should maybe try and work on making the forms a bit more solid. While the messy style works pretty well for the post apocalyptic stuff it's still a bit hard to figure out what everthing is supposed to be, it makes the textures seem like they've been applied a bit randomly. I do really like the colours you used, but maybe you could try to experiment with a couple of different schemes aswell, to see what you can get out of the picture!
Again I really like where you're going with the picture, just looking to give a bit of feedback ^^ I hope it was useful!
I think that you should maybe try and work on making the forms a bit more solid. While the messy style works pretty well for the post apocalyptic stuff it's still a bit hard to figure out what everthing is supposed to be, it makes the textures seem like they've been applied a bit randomly. I do really like the colours you used, but maybe you could try to experiment with a couple of different schemes aswell, to see what you can get out of the picture!
Again I really like where you're going with the picture, just looking to give a bit of feedback ^^ I hope it was useful!