Bloodsport 2 Revived: Swamp Elder

[Jaik]

HH: Starting late is fine, theres still two weeks before we start the next one, so you can catch up and join at the beginning with everyone on the next one :D Deadlines don't really matter for these. I like the compositions I and D, I think you could do some really cool stuff with lighting for D but getting it to look legit will be a real challenge. I has a nice flow to it, but I think changing the size of the thing coming out of the water would be better for composition because at the moment it is roughly taking up the same amount of room as the main character.

Cracked: That looks great man. Really nice atmosphere with it all. You can feel that it is huge but it is still kind of hard to tell exactly how huge. A small tree (copy and pasted from one the the two on the image) would have helped. Just really simple small one by its head. Also, with the bit of skin flaking off on his arm, I would repeat that in other areas of his body, just having the one looks kind of strange (like is it an injury? But then it would be bleeding. An old injury? Then he would probably have more of them. Is he slowly decaying? Again he would probably have more areas.) Things like that, just repeat things as often as you can. But other than that its really looking killer. Nice texture too! :)

Lyra: Looking forward to you uploading the finished piece xP

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Alright so here is my studies and my final. I realised I kind of stopped uploading my WIPs lol.. Whoops. I will try better next time.