02-19-2014, 04:07 AM
Wow, really great start to your sketchbook, I think what would really help is to exaggerate the materials a bit more (I hope I make sense), at the moment a few of your paintings look a lot like the same material, which I think is caused by the lack of smooth gradations/transitions between values, you're doing some really great work and your deviantart/tumblr is great :)