02-21-2014, 05:34 PM
You've got some really cool stuff, especially when you focus on structure and form rather than contour. When you do mostly contour, your stuff feels like it kinda falls apart.
For example, the first post on page 5 has a wide range of stuff, some of which looks massively better than others. Your structured gestures and imagination look great, but the drawings converted to lines are a lot flatter (In a lot of them, I feel like your initial sketch looks better, and then they flatten out.
Feels like when you've got a subject that forces you to consider contour and form a lot, like the croc and snake heads, it's leaps and bounds better.
And, with your lines, line weight is important. A completely continuous line that's the same length around everything also flattens things and removes depth.
For example, the first post on page 5 has a wide range of stuff, some of which looks massively better than others. Your structured gestures and imagination look great, but the drawings converted to lines are a lot flatter (In a lot of them, I feel like your initial sketch looks better, and then they flatten out.
Feels like when you've got a subject that forces you to consider contour and form a lot, like the croc and snake heads, it's leaps and bounds better.
And, with your lines, line weight is important. A completely continuous line that's the same length around everything also flattens things and removes depth.