02-22-2014, 01:57 PM
Thank you for your critique! The intended story is that the guy and the girl is hunted down by that monster. The guy is very skilled and so he fights the monster. The girl, however, is terrified by the monster. So she is hiding. Maybe I could give the girl a gun to show there is a connection?
Also, I want the focus to be the action between the monster and the guy. But I think that would just make the monster pop out too much because the purple is pretty bright. Maybe I should just darken everything around it?
Anyway, thank you again and I will change the piece according to your feedback.
Also, I want the focus to be the action between the monster and the guy. But I think that would just make the monster pop out too much because the purple is pretty bright. Maybe I should just darken everything around it?
Anyway, thank you again and I will change the piece according to your feedback.