In need of a critique
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Thanks for your input, Chantal! Yeah, it's convoluted for numerous reasons, one of which being that I didn't know whether or not to focus on the environment or characters. I guess in the end, I focused way too much on the environment and the characters kind of fell by the wayside. Now they're nothing more than a stigma. I added them in there, hoping to add a bit of narrative to the environment concept, but I evidently don't know how to add narrative correctly, haha. Once again, thank you. Much appreciated. I'll work on the focus a bit more - as well as a million other things, haha.
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In need of a critique - by Gavinchi - 02-22-2014, 03:13 PM
RE: In need of a critique - by ChantalFournier - 02-23-2014, 03:52 AM
RE: In need of a critique - by Gavinchi - 02-23-2014, 07:28 AM
RE: In need of a critique - by par gin - 02-24-2014, 12:11 AM
RE: In need of a critique - by Gavinchi - 02-24-2014, 06:05 AM
RE: In need of a critique - by ChantalFournier - 02-24-2014, 06:44 AM
RE: In need of a critique - by par gin - 02-24-2014, 01:36 PM
RE: In need of a critique - by Cj_marsh - 02-24-2014, 03:48 PM
RE: In need of a critique - by Mike086 - 02-24-2014, 04:36 PM
RE: In need of a critique - by Gavinchi - 02-27-2014, 10:55 AM

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