02-23-2014, 10:07 AM
Hey, really great to hear you started working on the comic and are just going for it.
I like the pages that you've got so far. The only thing that feels off is the use of photos for some of the panels, they look too apparent, especially when seen right next to your drawings. One other thing, on the first page we've got a picture of a city, and above that there's a picture of what looks to be a suburban house's window. The two don't really match so there's a loss of continuity between the two panels.
It would take you more time, however I feel it result in a better end product if you were to draw the buildings and other things that are photos at the moment. I am really looking forward to seeing where this will go. Keep up the good hard work, man. :]
I like the pages that you've got so far. The only thing that feels off is the use of photos for some of the panels, they look too apparent, especially when seen right next to your drawings. One other thing, on the first page we've got a picture of a city, and above that there's a picture of what looks to be a suburban house's window. The two don't really match so there's a loss of continuity between the two panels.
It would take you more time, however I feel it result in a better end product if you were to draw the buildings and other things that are photos at the moment. I am really looking forward to seeing where this will go. Keep up the good hard work, man. :]