In need of a critique
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I feel like it kind of needs a foreground element just to lead us into the painting. I just feel far away. If it's an environment, I wouldn't worry too much about the characters.

I agree that it needs a little more contrast. More darks. But I do think that that kind of smokey, hazy light you have coming from the top is really well done. Great mood.



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In need of a critique - by Gavinchi - 02-22-2014, 03:13 PM
RE: In need of a critique - by ChantalFournier - 02-23-2014, 03:52 AM
RE: In need of a critique - by Gavinchi - 02-23-2014, 07:28 AM
RE: In need of a critique - by par gin - 02-24-2014, 12:11 AM
RE: In need of a critique - by Gavinchi - 02-24-2014, 06:05 AM
RE: In need of a critique - by ChantalFournier - 02-24-2014, 06:44 AM
RE: In need of a critique - by par gin - 02-24-2014, 01:36 PM
RE: In need of a critique - by Cj_marsh - 02-24-2014, 03:48 PM
RE: In need of a critique - by Mike086 - 02-24-2014, 04:36 PM
RE: In need of a critique - by Gavinchi - 02-27-2014, 10:55 AM

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