04-12-2012, 04:26 AM
Hello guys!
Well, I desperately want to get into an University to study graphic design. And for that i need a stunning portfolio. So please, help me!
(also take a look at my sketchbook, there are other works)
But now, critique. i have that idea for a Diptychon with the themes Moon - Sun or the like.
I want it to be absoluetly bombastic. composition, colors, poses. everything. So far I am not succeedin -_-
![[Image: diptych_by_saraiza-d4vx5dc.jpg]](http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/102/3/e/diptych_by_saraiza-d4vx5dc.jpg)
the birds look still a bit strange. Also, i find it hard to create an opposite to the phoenix. any ideas?
the background for the phonix piece should be a night scene, with rays of light in the back. for the "raven" piece a fire inferno. I hope the contrast adds to the composition.
Now, lets hear your suggestions! And please, don't hold back. if its total shit, I need to learn it now or never.
Well, I desperately want to get into an University to study graphic design. And for that i need a stunning portfolio. So please, help me!
(also take a look at my sketchbook, there are other works)
But now, critique. i have that idea for a Diptychon with the themes Moon - Sun or the like.
I want it to be absoluetly bombastic. composition, colors, poses. everything. So far I am not succeedin -_-
the birds look still a bit strange. Also, i find it hard to create an opposite to the phoenix. any ideas?
the background for the phonix piece should be a night scene, with rays of light in the back. for the "raven" piece a fire inferno. I hope the contrast adds to the composition.
Now, lets hear your suggestions! And please, don't hold back. if its total shit, I need to learn it now or never.