Coreys Sketchbook

[Ignatz]

Hey CoreyH,

I like where this last piece is going but I think there are too many absolute verticals; the woman in the light, the staff, the buildings; I feel it needs a bit more variety to make it less static. Also, the relationship between the man and the woman is a little ambiguous. I'm guessing there is some sort of confrontation going on here; if so I think you could change the foreground character's pose somehow to stress that.

Hope that's of some help