03-07-2014, 05:58 AM
Hey man, I'm really loving that WIP you've got. It's got a really bad ass composition, and the subject matter is really interesting as well. Really, I think all it needs is just more love and polish. It looks as though there are a few places within the painting you are unsure of, mostly some background elements that could use some more defining.
The anatomy on the woman in the air is looking solid as far as I can tell. I think her perspective is off just slightly. If you flip the image a few times you should be able to see what I mean. Also, consider extending the bottom end of the scythe, pole, or whatever it is he's carrying so it goes out of the canvas. I feel it'd help lock in the composition a bit more.
Hope that all makes sense, haha. If you'd like me to do a quick paintover to better illustrate what I'm saying I'd be happy to help. You're styles really cool, just keep pushing it. I can't wait to see the end result of that piece. :]
The anatomy on the woman in the air is looking solid as far as I can tell. I think her perspective is off just slightly. If you flip the image a few times you should be able to see what I mean. Also, consider extending the bottom end of the scythe, pole, or whatever it is he's carrying so it goes out of the canvas. I feel it'd help lock in the composition a bit more.
Hope that all makes sense, haha. If you'd like me to do a quick paintover to better illustrate what I'm saying I'd be happy to help. You're styles really cool, just keep pushing it. I can't wait to see the end result of that piece. :]