I see nothing wrong with my anatomy

[Amit Dutta]

I think it's a bit better because you are thinking about the gesture a bit more. I also think the process of improving is a long one dictated by practice. You can't expect to improve overnight, and as this is a critique thread I think maybe instead of asking for more feedback here, you should start up a sketchbook thread if you haven't already and get into the habit of practicing and putting up your daily work there.
The routine practice will help you better than us commenting on each iteration here.
Good luck!