WIPS! - Bloodsports 9 - Choose Your Own Adventure 2!

[Jereme Peabody]

I'm having a rough time with this composition any suggestions?

My observations:
1. His left arm is way too stiff an high His elbow should be lowered and arm should point toward the action of the scene.
2. His right arm is too stiff and straight which leads the viewer away from your scene, not into it
3. Your black and white was pretty good, but when you added the color, you put the beings lighter than whatever is behind them. They should be slightly darker than whatever is behind them.
4. The black and white values were good, but then when you colored it in, the values changed. Keep the black and white, add a new 'color' layer and apply the colors to see if they work better for you.

That's all I got.