01-26-2012, 02:09 PM
The pose of the gorilla is nice and dynamic. I feel like the "FLYING FIST" part is competing with the logo a little since they're about the same size.
And for this part I might be totally wrong, but it's something to think about. The left side seems a little heavier? Maybe because the fist and the toy package are the same width? Also, a thing with design is to lead the viewers eye to the subject. At the moment, his fist is leading my eye off the package. It could just be me, does anyone else see that? Maybe if it were leading to the toy itself? Maybe you can try scaling it down a smidge and moving it inward a little?
And one last thing, this toy is for ages 18+? lol what kind of toy is this? (I hope there isn't secret x-rated functions for it... D:)
Anyway, it's looking really cool so far. :D
And for this part I might be totally wrong, but it's something to think about. The left side seems a little heavier? Maybe because the fist and the toy package are the same width? Also, a thing with design is to lead the viewers eye to the subject. At the moment, his fist is leading my eye off the package. It could just be me, does anyone else see that? Maybe if it were leading to the toy itself? Maybe you can try scaling it down a smidge and moving it inward a little?
And one last thing, this toy is for ages 18+? lol what kind of toy is this? (I hope there isn't secret x-rated functions for it... D:)
Anyway, it's looking really cool so far. :D