03-18-2014, 05:56 PM
Love that Boswell sisters clip! Haven't got much crit, maybe the perspective is a bit off especially with the bg wall, but the style kinda covers for that. Perhaps a bit too dark in the shadowed areas so you might want to show off the beaten up dumdums a bit more, and maybe with a bit of blood on them or smears on the floor as well, less saturated, so they don't just look like drunks? There are some tangents with the ciggy and her face, so that could be separated a bit better. The layout of the card looks clean and effective. Nice job overall!