WIPS! - Bloodsports 9 - Choose Your Own Adventure 2!
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Piotr, I agree that the gun appears to be just hanging on his finger rather than spinning, so it rather than looking cool it looks a little odd at the moment. Perhaps you could give the gun a little radial blur or something to quickly give it the impression of circular movement. Also, I'm not getting a clear sense of place from your background, so I would suggest that you make it more distinct to sell the concept.

Max
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RE: WIPS! - Bloodsports 9 - Choose Your Own Adventure 2! - by KyleScary - 04-11-2012, 01:54 PM
RE: WIPS! - Bloodsports 9 - Choose Your Own Adventure 2! - by dwalkerart - 04-14-2012, 02:42 PM
RE: WIPS! - Bloodsports 9 - Choose Your Own Adventure 2! - by Jereme Peabody - 04-14-2012, 08:12 PM
RE: WIPS! - Bloodsports 9 - Choose Your Own Adventure 2! - by dwalkerart - 04-14-2012, 09:15 PM
RE: WIPS! - Bloodsports 9 - Choose Your Own Adventure 2! - by Jereme Peabody - 04-14-2012, 10:27 PM
RE: WIPS! - Bloodsports 9 - Choose Your Own Adventure 2! - by dwalkerart - 04-15-2012, 10:04 AM
RE: WIPS! - Bloodsports 9 - Choose Your Own Adventure 2! - by Jereme Peabody - 04-17-2012, 06:34 PM
RE: WIPS! - Bloodsports 9 - Choose Your Own Adventure 2! - by dwalkerart - 04-16-2012, 02:40 PM
RE: WIPS! - Bloodsports 9 - Choose Your Own Adventure 2! - by dwalkerart - 04-18-2012, 12:11 AM
RE: WIPS! - Bloodsports 9 - Choose Your Own Adventure 2! - by Max Swinton - 04-18-2012, 06:05 AM
RE: WIPS! - Bloodsports 9 - Choose Your Own Adventure 2! - by Elektroschnitz3l - 04-21-2012, 07:24 AM

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