04-12-2014, 09:00 AM
Hi Rat, it's Ryan. Welcome to crimsondaggers c:
For the naked man, the proportions are good and the drawing. However, the edges seem to be wrong in shadows for me(and the rest of the image they're also hard all around).
For the ogre, the composition I really like. From far away the image reads very well. However, upon looking closer there are a lot of problems. The forms on the arm lack definition and look weird(so, work up your anatomy skills and your ability to render basic forms. I think this will help you). There is also way too much black in the armor(and elsewhere in the image). Use your black strategically, there should be enough reflected light that there shouldn't be so much in darkness.
I like the robot, good form. However, I think it appears to be overly dull. Perhaps use more saturation and try a few more hues here and there.
For the naked man, the proportions are good and the drawing. However, the edges seem to be wrong in shadows for me(and the rest of the image they're also hard all around).
For the ogre, the composition I really like. From far away the image reads very well. However, upon looking closer there are a lot of problems. The forms on the arm lack definition and look weird(so, work up your anatomy skills and your ability to render basic forms. I think this will help you). There is also way too much black in the armor(and elsewhere in the image). Use your black strategically, there should be enough reflected light that there shouldn't be so much in darkness.
I like the robot, good form. However, I think it appears to be overly dull. Perhaps use more saturation and try a few more hues here and there.