04-17-2014, 11:56 AM
Yooo crimson arena is going really nice!!! I loved those silhouettes from your last post, lots of personality an all of them with their different shape designs.
I love the spikiness and threatening feel of the rough sketch you picked, honestly I think your final is starting to lose a lot of that fun energy. It seems like you're taming down a lot of the spikes and the silhouette feels more rounded. For example I really love how those diagonal negative spaces the rough sketch has between her neck and giant pauldrons, but in the final there are those cloth collars filling up all the space and making the shoulders and head are feel like a big semicircle with some points instead of an awesome jagged threatening mess of triangles all around the top of the design. Does that make sense?
That's all just my opinion though, hope you don't mind. XD
good luck, much respect for all the work you're putting into this!
I love the spikiness and threatening feel of the rough sketch you picked, honestly I think your final is starting to lose a lot of that fun energy. It seems like you're taming down a lot of the spikes and the silhouette feels more rounded. For example I really love how those diagonal negative spaces the rough sketch has between her neck and giant pauldrons, but in the final there are those cloth collars filling up all the space and making the shoulders and head are feel like a big semicircle with some points instead of an awesome jagged threatening mess of triangles all around the top of the design. Does that make sense?
That's all just my opinion though, hope you don't mind. XD
good luck, much respect for all the work you're putting into this!