Apollo Illustration in Need Critique and/or Paintover asap

[Dark-fenrir]

Nice rendering skills! I like how you organized the light around his head to show he's the sun god. Maybe you can even push that further and have a stronger light/dark contrast to emphasize the point.

Just a couple of detail things - his arm lengths are different, and very noticeably so. His hip is looking a little wide for a male (maybe that's just me though, double check). His jaw is too far back.

Thanks! That helps a lot, I see what you mean about the jaw and the arms