04-18-2014, 11:02 AM
There are some really interesting things happening in this image so far shape and scale wise so I look forward to seeing where you take it.
Anyway just some thoughts from my end~
I'd say the main thing to consider here is what your focus is supposed to be in the image. You say you want it to read as a dock then I would add more ships and perhaps change the angle of the camera to show that, even if it's just one more coming in for a landing or something to add a little more movement to the image. Right now I am being drawn more to the people in the front than I am to the giant ship which makes me wonder if having them there is entirely necessary. I know you wanna add the hologram thing for them to be working on, but perhaps there is a better spot for them than the foreground. Unless the idea is for us to be looking through their work space outward to the happenings of the dock in which case their placement makes more sense, but what's gonna be drawing my focus toward the ship/ the unloading. Perhaps something in particular is being unloaded, or someone is being welcomed/ escorted from the ship.
Anyway just some thoughts from my end~
I'd say the main thing to consider here is what your focus is supposed to be in the image. You say you want it to read as a dock then I would add more ships and perhaps change the angle of the camera to show that, even if it's just one more coming in for a landing or something to add a little more movement to the image. Right now I am being drawn more to the people in the front than I am to the giant ship which makes me wonder if having them there is entirely necessary. I know you wanna add the hologram thing for them to be working on, but perhaps there is a better spot for them than the foreground. Unless the idea is for us to be looking through their work space outward to the happenings of the dock in which case their placement makes more sense, but what's gonna be drawing my focus toward the ship/ the unloading. Perhaps something in particular is being unloaded, or someone is being welcomed/ escorted from the ship.