04-30-2014, 12:31 PM
The piece is really looking nice!
I would work the composition some. The lower left hand corner has allot of dead space, try shrinking the horse and rider a little, keep them on the right lower third intersecting lines (using the rule of thirds of course), add some background for scale reference then enlarge the beast and get his upper body on the top left intersecting lines. The dust will really help you direct the eye.
I would love to see what you come up with:)
I would work the composition some. The lower left hand corner has allot of dead space, try shrinking the horse and rider a little, keep them on the right lower third intersecting lines (using the rule of thirds of course), add some background for scale reference then enlarge the beast and get his upper body on the top left intersecting lines. The dust will really help you direct the eye.
I would love to see what you come up with:)
Eric
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