05-06-2014, 07:45 AM
Hey man!
I think that Godzilla piece came out really cool. You nailed the VFX elements that you were aiming for, especially with all the lightning going on. Dig that hot rim light. Cool that you went ahead and did a more rendered piece :D
But you've nailed the problems with it too! The foreground distracts quite a bit from the cool action. Look at how some of the compositional parts point kind of weird, like the street light and the building it's leading to. The building is not letting Godzilla breathe like he deserves! I think that you could move it down, or even remove it. Instead the street lights could point more in his direction!
Otherwise great job on the mechanical stuff as always, it makes me all dizzy. That means you're cool! Rock on dude! Hope you don't mind the crit! :D
I think that Godzilla piece came out really cool. You nailed the VFX elements that you were aiming for, especially with all the lightning going on. Dig that hot rim light. Cool that you went ahead and did a more rendered piece :D
But you've nailed the problems with it too! The foreground distracts quite a bit from the cool action. Look at how some of the compositional parts point kind of weird, like the street light and the building it's leading to. The building is not letting Godzilla breathe like he deserves! I think that you could move it down, or even remove it. Instead the street lights could point more in his direction!
Otherwise great job on the mechanical stuff as always, it makes me all dizzy. That means you're cool! Rock on dude! Hope you don't mind the crit! :D