05-09-2014, 09:29 PM
Pencil drawing.
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Thank you for the crit! And yes actually i am going to have a meeting about the script for the first part of the book tonight. And i'll hopefully start the finished drawings next week! Thank you for showing interest =D
(05-09-2014, 06:56 AM)meat Wrote: Detail isn't what makes a painting good. It's the story and emotion it conveys and invokes. I think the light keeper girl painting is in a good place. I see some fog on the ground behind the pillar and the cart, maybe you can try adding some fog in the foreground too. But I like the painting as is. Good work here! Anything new on the graphic novel project?
Thank you for the crit! And yes actually i am going to have a meeting about the script for the first part of the book tonight. And i'll hopefully start the finished drawings next week! Thank you for showing interest =D