Clumsy Waitress

[JyonnyNovice]

I like that you drew the dogs dick in. I feel like dog dicks are under-represented.

lol thanks, I guess I was playing on the humiliation aspect - she's just made a fool of herself and there's a dog with his dick out - although dogs dicks don't hang down like that, they kinda run up along their bodies (why can I picture that but not how a foot stretches back? >.<)

I should've done some full thumbnails, it started as just drawing a character then I decided to put a background after - I'm so slow at drawing full pages, the thought of going back and doing more thumbnails and drawing it again makes me so tired... I need to work on my stamina I think!

Although, I use the crop tool in photoshop to position things, since it has the grid of thirds on it; everything is positioned ok, I believe.



The top right intersection over the waitress (well, her booby) and nothing conflicting for attention on any of the other intersections. It seems balanced; the bar, barman and dog on the left midground, the waitress on the right foreground with a bit of the table behind her. Maybe the hotel could be shifted to the left, but I like that the sun will be shining through the gap between hotel and bar...

Anyway, I seem to be obsessing over small details, it's not my opus magnas or anything, I should probably just get on and colour it and start working on the next one - (with more thumbnails!)